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some drown in your wake
of saccharine smiles, salty tears
disarmed and deserted

slightly bitter hugs
with you, no pause for effect
take your bow and go.

sigh singes my lips
no need to linger longer
gasp and i'm gone

arms pulling, rolling waves
no longer drifting alone
dock me near your heart

flame, wings of a bird
spreading in passionate flight
sing against blue skies

forever trying to
see me in you, but my soul won't
reflect in blue eyes

you support the sun
as Atlas, but so gently
in strong capable hands

once more, hearing you
heavy stepping away from me
wish you weren't so sure

below denim jeans
thighs like star crossed lovers kiss
in chaste defiance
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bunch of haiku

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:iconfeverorforgottenwing:
below denim jeans
thighs like star crossed lovers kiss
in chaste defiance

oh my god.
you're amazing.
:iconhaiku-poets:
star crossed lovers? have we been reading Romeo and Juliet? lolz, these are fantastic though, bravo :+fav:

sigh singes my lips
no need to linger longer
gasp and i'm gone

that one really catches my attention, very well written

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Join this club? yes you should
it just started, be the first, or second :D
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hmmm...I told you that you were good. :p Great stuff Nickie.

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